A place for prayer.
A Poem
Published on May 30, 2007 By Hazel Target In Poetry
She was my fountain, my muse;
I was full of her lips grazing across mine,
brimming with hips consciously restrained.
She was not a deep well of joy,
but a wild ocean of an angel--
and I was special too,
because I knew.

I drank deep of happiness, for
the keeper of the source never thirsts.
I continued long after she left,
laid off without solace but
to quander my remaining fortune.

Then with poetry I scraped
everything I had left
like jam from a jar,
somehow not realizing
that when it was gone
I would be empty.

Comments
on May 31, 2007
A personal aside: every woman who ever left me, each left me with something to feel - something to write about and wonder. No love is ever in vain, but that's not much consolation as you lay all the love notes and receipts before you and "wonder where all the good luck went." (Quoted phrase from Charles Bukowski's "I Made a Mistake", which you might like.)

Professional criticism: I look forward to your continued writing. Your writing has become a welcome surprise that I appreciate more than I'm probably conveying. - BM