Rough Night

Published on May 3, 2007 By Hazel Target In Poetry

what are tears
to me I do not cry
say cry me a river cry
me an ocean but the
ocean is here and it pounds
into my head relentless
the weakest point a hairline
fracture a single salty drop to
betray the hurricane.

Comments

Buddah Moskowitz

on May 04, 2007

Hey, very good. Terse and packed with intensity.

Good job! Thanks!

foreverserenity

on May 09, 2007

This was very good!

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